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雅思写作大作文范文分析:对电影投资

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题目:Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?


Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?


翻译:和本地电影相比,很多人喜欢看外国电影,这是因为什么呢?政府是否应该增加对当地电影产业的拨款


话题:社会类-电影-政府投资


类型:混合类


关键词:foreign films,locally produced films


分析:


拿到这种混合类的题目,大家不要慌,一个问题一个主体段即可哦。


也就是说结构应为:


开头段:引出话题+引出下文(包含两个要点1.This essay 会讲具体原因 2. 我个人认为政府应该/不应该给更多赞助)


主体1段:原因段


主体2段:写你认为应该/不应该的理由


结尾:总结+重述观点


观点方面:可能很多考生本人都是国外电影的爱好者,说道漫威宇宙就激动,肖申克的救赎就是对我的救赎,宇宙观的启蒙是星际穿越,哈利波特是我的童年,男神都是特工,看到我家小狗的眼神就想起忠犬八公。国外电影对本土电影的冲击力真的是不小。现在中国的电影行业也蒸蒸日上,拍出了很多非常经典的电影,但是这道题目的先决设定就是很多人更爱看外国电影,所以我们要找到一些可以写的外国电影比本国电影好的点,比如:


1. locally made films in many countries lack better plots and the characters do not have the necessary depth to touch the hearts of the audiences ( 很多国家的本土电影情节简单,缺乏深度)


在论证时,我们可以采用举例论证,如:


large film industries like the Hollywood can allocate a huge budget and have talented producers and directors while films made in developing countries have a small amount to spend on a movie and do not have many talented movie makers.


2. overseas films have higher quality in terms of visual effects and audio(国外电影的视觉效果和音效可能更好)


在论证时,同样可以采取举例论证:


For instances, films such as Batman or Spiderman had been watched by people all over the world, due to their sophisticated digital effects.


以上提供给大家的这些例子都可以记下来,在考场上使用哦,还有部分科技改变生活的题目也可以使用这些例子。


那么到底政府是否应该出资呢?


如果我们写不应该的话,我们就需要去论证一下政府钱有限,应该投在更重要的领域,如教育或医疗,也就是咱们这一整段都要围绕着教育医疗为什么比电影重要去探讨。


如果写应该,那么就可以写防止人才流失,每个国家都有的电影从业者,但是因为资金力度不够,不愿意从事这个行业,或无法取得好的成果,如果政府愿意投资一些的话会更容易出成绩,更好的吸引人才,更好的宣传文化。


Each country has some talented producers, actors and filmmakers who for the lack of financial and political support cannot bring out the best.


No doubt big budget is required to make better quality films and the government should provide subsidiary to help local film industry progress.


写应该比写不应该更不容易跑题,写不应该需要注意把握尺度,不要写偏题,不要变成长篇大论证明教育和医疗为什么重要了。


好啦,分析了这么多,你是不是有思路了呢,来咱们看看今天的精选范文:


It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing(补贴,赞助) the industry.


(开头段简明扼要,两句话,注意对local film进行了替换,使用了domestic Domestic - 形容词:国内的,本国的,如:domestic flights/airport- 国内航班/机场;Domestic也可表示家庭的,家用的,如: domestic appliances -家用小电器。在雅思阅读中,大家还会碰到domestic表示家养的,饲养的的意思和wild成反义如domestic cat-家养猫)


There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets(预算,资金-词汇替换) for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond films are examples of(举例论证,xxx are examples of xxx) such productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors(这个修饰用的特别好,accomplished-形容词,才华突出的,技艺高超的,我们可以用这个词形容某个行业中厉害的人如:an accomplished chef-技艺高超的厨师). The poor quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison(对比论证写法2 ;xxx suffers in comparison. 


就是A是这样的,A怎么怎么好,写一些关于A好的论证,在结尾处加一句说 B suffers in comparison- 意思就是B没法和A比,B没有A的这些优点).


(主体1段-原因段给了两个原因:1是观影效果好,原因2是明星效应。 结构-主题句+分论点1+分论点2)


In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. (观点)In every country, there may be talented amateur(业余爱好者) film-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. (解释)New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' films, which were partly funded by government subsidies(举例).


(主体2段-是否应该投入更多资金,作者观点-应该,指出了缺钱的事实+投钱的好处。结构为:观点-解释-举例)


In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market(主导市场,占据市场).


(结尾段:总结+重申观点)


好词:


注意这个文章中用到了很多“资金”的说法,总结一下如下:


Fund: 名词-资金(可数)可以写复数,如government funds, short of funds.


也可做动词-资助, 如:The school is being funded by the government.


Subsidize: 动词-资助,发放津贴,如….is subsidized by the government.


Budget: 名词-预算,如,a monthly budge -每月预算 , the education budge 教育预算


Within budget- 没有超出预算


Over budget-超出预算


Support….financially/ financial support – 经济支持


好啦,以上就是今天的精选范文,希望大家在家里都能踏踏实实的认真复习,管住自己,过有自制力的高效人生。



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